This might just be my preference, but I'd suggest adding a slight white highlight around each line. You've got it on the Washington St GL branch as it crosses the CR, and it looks good.
I think this is about as nice as you could expect for a project in this day and age. Nice to see the Lindemann is at least respected. And what looks like a residential tower echos Rudolph's original vision, so I'm down for that.
I was skeptical too, but if you start asking around, you'll understand why so many people are switching to induction stove tops.
https://www.epicurious.com/shopping/induction-vs-gas-why-i-said-goodbye-to-open-flame-cooking
https://www.nytimes.com/2022/03/11/dining/induction-cooking.html...
Economics. They only build buildings like this for uber-wealthy. Now, it helps that these are focused around the UWS/UES so you've got that context. But most other buildings in NYC look like the basic slop you get, too.
What's interesting is that this is exactly what WIT was going for with their new dorms over the last 20 years. At some point that has to go out the window when you are talking about a tower.